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Praying for you Page 14-Final-

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<<As the two were flying from above, Krystal was now looking below in silent sorrow.

"This is Tabora's temple. It's our goddess of happiness, purity and Love." The Cloudrunner informed as he clearly realized that something was not quite right with her. She did not reply for just to idle more looking at it, in her face the same sorrow was exppressed.

"Cloudrunner, can you get me down there for a while please?" She asked after a pause.

"Of course. Hold tight!" The pterosaur replied and then started to descend. Soon the two reached the ground. There were lot's of dinosaur's nearby. Krystal got off Cloudrunner and then started walking silently towards the temple.

"May I ask were are you going?" Clourunner asked kindly

"I'll be heading for the temple a little bit if you do not mind." She then replied back right after turning a little bit to see him out of the corner of her eye. It was then that in her way of the temple she was drawing the attention of every Dinosaur nearby. But she didn't seem to care, not at all. In her eyes, her internal torment could be very easily read. So did the bad ass dinosaur who was standing in her way, as he stepped aside, feeling her sorrow.Krystal reached the temple as she placed her right foot on the first headstep. She slowly listed herself up as she right after, walked forward and towards Tabora's holy statue for to stand in front of it later. Tears now made their appearance.

"My Goddess, the holy spirit that define's my heart and feelings, please help me find him. I've been trying more than a year searching here and there after the attack, but I didn't find him yet." She begged as he knelt.

"Despair has started getting to me, I have nightmares about it. I can't stop crying as my heart has been broken into a thousand pieces and I...Oh Goddess...can't fix it, not on my own...not without him, not anymore. I miss him...I can't be...He's amazing, he is the only one who came like thunder crashing these walls of stone. He's the only one I really loved, he was the only one always looking for me, being there for me. I wouldn't be here if he wasn't involved in my life. I never meant to be bitter at him. I trully regret everything bad I said to him. Now that he is gone, I can only see how important he was for me...Please Goddess Tabora, bring him back to me, that's my only request for a living. The one and only..." She desperately prayed pausing for a little more right after. A while later, she risen from the ground, slowly wiping the tears away, to stare at the statue again, trying to set boundries on her sorrow, however still reminescing him. A red flower was magically summoned among her fingers as she was rising her right palm up, to silently place it upon the holy statue with the utmost of devotion and care, like it meant a lot more that it looked, for only to stare at it even more seeming to be try to reach her beloved one through it. But right after, a mysterious bright light engulfed the red flower, which soon turned into white magical power and headed towards a bright Star, the "Lylat shining princess". This drew all of the dinosaurs' attention as more and more were now coming to the place. Sharing Krystal's feelings each one of them also sent a glowing magical power towards the three bright stars. The pure power of emotion exploded, making a vision of someone really familiar slightly appear, having as a background the beautiful Saurian night sky. Krystal was now looking at the sight, speechless>>

This was the original story scenario Praying for you was built on. It concerns another story I have building all this time along with my Yu GI Oh tribute, in Krystal's deperate search for one and truly love from the time the two were separated due an sudden alien attack. The story is named: Star Fox The reunion.

Here I am also accepting critiques on this part of story. Anything you would like to see or point out can be posted here. Same goes for your personal opinion.

I RESERVE EVERY COPYRIGHT OF THE STORY CHARACTERS AND THE PLOT, just for typicality reasons. Nobody else may use anything related to this story scenario or build up on it, without my permission.

Krystal's model was firstly developed by harley Fox and Converted to use by LittleDragon.

The current Krystal model was modified by me to be more looking to Krystal of the Nintendo Star Fox games.

Storyline by me.

This comic was created on Photoshop by me.
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A beautiful and emotional story, it would have brought me to tears if I had any to shed.